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Post by Snack Addict on Jul 6, 2006 21:42:51 GMT -5
((I love it! I finally got around to reading all of it. It's awesome.))
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 10, 2006 16:15:54 GMT -5
J.D. just stared at the picture of Neil. Was this possible? How could he live for so long? And why was he doing this for a job to keep him alive? It was all too much for him. In a way, now he knew why the people after Lily knew where she lived. They'd just have to look in a phone book and search for name. Lily wasn't married and the place on the tape looked close to the old supermarket about 10 miles down the road. It seemed so played. He ran toward the phone and lifted it up, but the phone line was gone. No wonder she couldn't call the authorities either, the lines were off. He reached to his trusty cell phone and dialed. He then thought, when I got to the airport, she answered, so this was fairly new, so the evidence was good if there were any footprints or hand prints, which there were bound to be. He put the phone to his ear after calling 911. "Hello...my name is Jason Irons and I'm at 5634 Fall Road at my sisters residence, her name is Lily...I mean Lilus Irons...I think she was kidnapped..." he explained.
Lily sat on her couch after calling her brother. Her adrenaline was pumping, and couldn't wait until J.D. got on the plane and to her house. She was so frightened. Even if she had two black belts in Tae Kwon Do and owned a gun, she was still frightened. She wandered to the phone then thought, should I call the police about this?....yes...yes I will call. she then lifted the phone dialed but she stopped, there was no dial tone. She set the phone down slowly, glancing around the house as if expecting someone to hop out and grab her, and she was right. Two strong arms wrapped around her and she screamed loudly. She wriggled around but suddenly remembered what to do in a situation like this. She flung her foot up, hitting the man right in the groin and he moaned in pain dropping her. She hopped fro the man and spun around, whamming the ball of her foot into his foot and then thrust her palm under his nose and pushed, throwing him back wards with a very possible broken nose. The man hit the floor hard, screaming in pain through-out his body. Lily made a run for her room, panic-stricken. As the man screamed on the floor, three new men came inside. First it was Neil, who's heavy eyes looked around the room as he held a gun in his grip. Another came in who was also on the tape. His hair was a deep brown, almost raven black. His eyes were a deep black and under his eyes were almost shadows, almost looking like make-up. His teeth were shaped rather strange, when he smiled, his back teeth had large fangs, his canine teeth a bit longer then normal. His clothes were a jade silt button shirt with a black overcoat. His blue jeans made his top look like a casual outfit. "Dillon...go around the back," Neil mumbled, his voice almost robotic as he stepped over his hurt comrade with no care, the other behind him did the same as Dillon came around the back. Before they went any farther, Neil stopped and turned to the man behind him. "Rusty...get a girl from the car will ya...we'll need her to get this one," he explained, glancing around behind him every few moments like a paranormal being. "Sure thing Neil..." Rusty answered with a nod, and went back outside toward the van.
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 13, 2006 0:22:02 GMT -5
Lily hurried to her room, rushing toward her bedroom and sliding against the carpet as she headed for under the bed. She rushed to pull out a plain black box. She opened it up with no time to waste. Lying in the box was a HK Pistol, just a small simple handgun, easy to use. She checked for a loaded gun and was hopeful it would be. She looked carefully but sadly only found two bullets. "Oh great..." she whispered loudly and angry to herself. As she punished herself in her mind, she heard a noice near her door and she twitched, swinging around and aiming the gun at the door, waiting for someone to storm in. "Lily?" a voice called from outside her room, probably against the wall near her room. "Lily...we have surprise...better not shoot or you'll regret it," the voice chuckled. It was a odd chuckle, it was quick and quiet and it sounded like he was chuckling with his mouth closed. Lily stared at the door as something began to creep before her eyes. Her eyes gaped larger and larger as the picture of the thing before her became more clear. It was young Raven, her face dripping with ruined make-up and her cheeks puffed. Her eyes were bloodshot from crying. Her blonde hair was a mess and her clothing was nothing close to clean and neat like on the tape. "Raven!?" Lily gasped, her mouth quivering in fear for her friends safety. Raven couldn't speak, a large piece of ducktape on her mouth made it hard to breath from her intense panic. She was shuddering terribly, almost as hard as a seizure paient. "Lily...just come quietly, so I don't have to put a hole through this girls head," a gun appeared from the side and pressed itself against her head. Raven screamed through the tape and she almost crumbled to the ground from her own shock. Lily was about to stand to grab Raven from the gun's site. She started to stand and move close but was stopped by the evil voice,"By the time you reach Raven I will have already put a bullet through her skull and her blood on your face. You don't want that do you Lily?" he asked with a eerie voice. "How do you know my name...how did you know I was with these girls..?" she demanded angrily to the man. "Oh...I know a lot about you. I jogged down their lisence plate and that lead me straight to them. I watched them for a while, seeing when I could hit them and kidnap them. And while I was doing that I happened to see you again...Lilus Irons, twenty four years of age, younger sister of Jason David Irons and daughter of Cristy and Donny Irons. Your mother died of cancer and your father is now in a retirement home in Utah." Lily was silent. "How do you know all about this? Who are you? Some kind of bad cop or from the CIA?" she hissed, dropping her gun a bit lower. "You'll figure it out when you see my face when you give up...hurry...my patience is growing thin," he replied, his voice edgy. Lily crouched their a moment, thinking to herself. Should she give up that easy? She had to to keep her friends lives off the line of death. She stood up but hesitated a moment. Maybe she could hold up until Jason got here. No, that was impossible. His flight was probably just taking off and it would take too long. By the time he would be there, Raven and possibly Cassie's body would be in her hallway, maybe even her's. She moved up to the door, dropping the gun and stood in front of Raven. "All right...I give up," she replied regretfully.
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 13, 2006 16:47:06 GMT -5
Raven whimpered and shuddered, falling into Lily's arms. Tears stained her shirt as Raven teared and weeped, her body calming jsut by the touch of Lily's warm body. As she held Raven, the man appeared in front of her eyes. She just stared, but not in fear, in rather confusing stare. "Who are you...I don't even know who you are?!" she stated loudly. Neil looked at her with expanded eyes and disappointed. "Oh Lily...I'm hurt..." he replied, sighing as he put his hand to his chest as if having a heart attack. "I can't believe you'd forget me...poor old Neil..." she shook his head as he lowered it. Lily was absent-minded a moment, having no clue who he was. "Neil...I...I don't..." she babbled softly, but her memory began to slowly return like something hit her in the head and jogged her memory. "Ne-Neil...highschool Neil? You're supposed to be dead?" she exclaimed. Neil stared at her then laughed,"Oh sorry...If you want I'll play dead for ya..." he teased. "Sorry if I missed my moment in the death bed sweetheart, but I'm not dead just yet...its not my time yet.." he added with his odd chuckle. Lily glared,"You sick, twisted..." "Twisted what? Insane? Demented? Deranged? Come on sweetheart, use a bigger vocabulary when insulting a freak like me," he smirked smuggly.
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 13, 2006 18:04:40 GMT -5
"Neil what's happened to you...what have you done? You commited murder! Also, you've kidnapped these girls and now me! How low can you get!!" she hissed, spitting into his face in her fury. Neil just rolled his eyes, as if not ammused. "Yeah...so?" Neil retorted, wiping his face with his hand. "Oh...and before I forget," he replied, grabbing Raven from her arms and holding her close to him. He pressed the gun to her head and stared deeply at Lily. "Where is the tape!" he said slowly word by word. Lily's eyes widened then softened, as if she had no idea what he meant,"What? What tape? I don't have it?" she questioned soflty. "Yes you do! Now, where is the tape Lily! Give it to me now or I'll kill the girl right here...I'll give you to the count of 5..." he replied, pausing a moment. "1..." "Neil I don't know what your talking about! Why are you even..." she babbled. "2.." he interfered with her babbling. "Neil don't! I...I...I don't know..." "3..." Raven was crying hard now, shuddering and shaking her head as she felt this was her end. "NEIL STOP THIS!!" Lily screamed, tears falling down her face now. "I...I..." she mumbled. She had to tell him, or Raven's death would be all her fault. "4!" Neil snarled, cocking the gun and readying to fire. "NEIL!!!!" Lily exclaimed, reaching for the gun in hand. "5!!!!" Neil roared. Then, the sound of the bullet shot out like a crash of a gong at the end of a wonderful musical finale.
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 14, 2006 14:05:08 GMT -5
Raven toppled from Neil's hands but she wasn't dead, her tears were halted and her eyes were closed as he body had automatically fallen. She began to slowly open her eyes, suddenly noticing that she wasn't dead at all. She looked up at Lily, who was shaking in horror and her eyes were wide as she stared at the supposed-to-be-dead Raven. Neil glanced at the gun peculiarly, as if he thought something was wrong with it. "You know...when I fire a gun, usually I'm not supposed to see a living girl below my feet..." he scolded his gun, staring at it and shaking it as punishment. "But I guess Raven moved in toward Lily when she outstretched her hand or something. Oh well, I guess I'll just kill her now," he pressed the gun in the back of Raven's head, moving her blonde hair away from its site. "No! Neil wait! I'll tell you where the tape is, just don't hurt the girls please," Lily cried, her make-up tearing across her face almost like face paint. Neil glanced up, seeing her face. He slowly removed the gun from Raven's head and awaited his answer. "Well? Where is it?" "Its...on the T.V. set, beside the black remote." she answered, her gaze dropping low as she grew depressed and disappointed by what she had done. Neil nodded, then glanced to Rusty. "Rust...you heard her...get the tape from the T.V..." he ordered. He then slid his gun behind him in his pants and put his shirt over it so it was unseen by any eyes anywhere. Rusty nodded and headed toward the television set. Now, Rusty was a very tall man and also very thin. When he saw the tape in between the shelves side and the side of the T.V, the space was fairly small for any normal hand to slip through, but it was simple as cake for Rusty, who didn't even have to move the T.V. over to reach it. Rusty was about 6'2" and about stick thin and didn't have a very powerful build like Neil and Dillon. Though, his speed and endurance was another story. He could move so fast, even a well trained sniper would have problems getting at least a perfect lock on him for the kill. He had dirty blonde hair that hung in front of his pale and shadowed face, making hi look mysterious and hidden from the world. Though, he was proud of one thing about him. Earrings. In his left ear were about eight earrings, and on his eyebrow about four went across in a line on his eyebrow. He also had a piercing on his tongue and bottom lip. It was astonishing that none of the earrings had gotten caught on anything. He grabbed the tape and grinned,"We got it Neil...now lets get out of hear. I'm sure at least one person heard the gunshot." he informed. Neil nodded and grabbed Raven from the floor as she shuddered at Lily's feet. He shoved Raven toward Rusty who was stunned a moment by Raven's presence. "Your coming with me Lily," Neil smiled, grabbing her arm and pulling her violently and forcefully toward himself. He removed a walkie-talkie from his side pouch and called in softly for Dillon. Raven was taken outside toward the van and thrown in. As Lily was escorted outside, she spun around, back-handing Neil square in the face, sending him hard sand tumbling to the floor. She ran around the back but ran square into a hard chest and hands gripped powerfully on her wrists as she screamed and wriggled around. She tried to use the same tactic she used on the first man, but Dillon caught her foot and slapped her hand with his palm and her body was sent to the floor like a rag-doll. Dillon grabbed her body brutally and threw her in the van, not caring at least a moment about her and the van's hard surface. He strolled toward Neil, who was lifting himself off the ground. "You OK?" Dillon asked, his voice a bit gruff and hard. "yeah...Yeah.." Neil answered, shooing his hand in his face. "Just get Harry in the house and get in the van," he ordered, rubbing his face painfully and pouted childishly as he sauntered toward the car, caressing his check. Dillon came out a few moments later with Harry's body slung over his shoulder and threw him in the back with Raven and Lily, but lighter and much more soft. He slammed the van door viciously, almost as if he wanted to break the van door and hopped in the front seat beside the driver Neil. Rusty hopped in the back of the van, blocking one of the exits out of the car. Harry's body lay against the other, so if you had to get to the door, you'd moved Harry's unconscious body first, giving Rusty enough time to stop the escape. Though, they knew either girl wasn't stupid enough to hop out of a moving vehicle. Too risky.
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Post by Repo Man on Jul 21, 2006 21:11:56 GMT -5
As the cleaning team cleared Lily's house, J.D. sat nervously, biting his nail and licking his lip as he sat their impatiently, awaiting any clue from the crew that they may be able to find out who did this. He wondered when the officer came to ask him questions, should he tell him about Neil being on the tape. It would probably help but he was seemingly worried that if he told them and they found where he was hiding, he'd kill the girls, and the rescue that he had gone through today would've been useless. He thought hard, rubbing his temples in complete stress. He couldn't keep it a secret forever. It really didn't matter anyway if he told them. Neil's face and they other's faces were clear enough for them to find out who it was. He would tell them he found the tape, watched it, but didn't recgognize it. He then thought, wait...they could just look in my files and see that I have some history with Neil. Great. J.D. frowned and knew he might as well.
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Post by Repo Man on Sept 4, 2006 20:22:55 GMT -5
As J.D. pondered the moment he had, Officer John Demming entered the large cabin house. He looked about in his early thirties with a face of power and solemn but there is a funner side to everyone. He had a casual look to him, a plain simple black tee shirt with a brown long sleeved jacket. Holstered and shielded by his coat was a his Colt. 45, or his sidearm. Also fastened inside his coat pocket was his bagde which he admired very much. His jeans were tight blue jeans with his wallet connected by a chain. He looked like a normal person that would wouldn't even remember if you past by him on the street like most of the people you see in the world. He had a buzz cut hair style and he was cleanly shaven at the chin. His eyes were a dull and almost colorless hazel and above his left eye was a small scar. He had recieved from a incident when he first started this little job of his. A man they were chasing after happened to grab a pole and smacked John with the end. He was lucky it didn't strike his eyes or he probably wouldn't be on this case. He gazed around, looking for a certain someone. A young man by the name of Jason Irons had recalled that his little sister had been kidnapped. He glanced around, seeing if a single person would stand out through-out the cleaning crew and photo-shooters in the room. He than witenessed a rather noticable man that he suspected to be him, since he was doing nothing but sitting. He sauntered up behind him and put his hand onto the youth. J.D. hopped from his seat and spun around. He gave a sigh of relief to see a fellow officer here. "Sorry...Jason Irons," he arose from his seat and took John's hand. "Officer...?" he awaited a response. "Demmings. Officer John Demmings, but please...call me John." John returned the shake with a calm cool smile.
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Post by Repo Man on Sept 9, 2006 19:43:28 GMT -5
"John...all right..." J.D. answered with a kind smile back. "You can call me Jason or J.D." Jason replied, hoping for the approach of J.D. "I'll just call you Jason..." John responded with a half grin, half laugh. J.D. just decided to smile back, not remark about his prefered name. "Anyway...enough with introduction...time to get to the improtant stuff. So, when did your sister call you?" he questioned, pulling from his jacket pocket a pad of small paper and he jotted down Jason's name in his quick handwriting. "Well...she called me around 10:00 this morning in Texas and she told me that she was possibly in trouble..." J.D. explained. "With the law? Did she gamble with someone?" John inspected, staring into J.D.'s eyes as he spoke, awaiting an answer. "No...she said that her friends had seen something...," he wandered toward the video camera and pointed to it,"There's a tape in here that you may want to look at," he explained. "Is that so..." John muttered. He wandered toward it and pressed 'play'. His body was in the way of the T.V. as he stood observing it. J.D. couldn't tell what kind of look was on John's face when he watched it but he knew he'd be surprised by it. As it finished in a matter of moments, John turned around and unplugged the camera and took it within his hands. "I'll take this off your hands for know. I'll give it to the police so maybe they can idenify the men in the tape." "All right...is there anything else?" J.D. questioned.
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Post by Repo Man on Nov 6, 2006 14:03:49 GMT -5
"No...not that I recall...I think I can leave you alone now! Thank you very much for your time J.D." John extended a kind hand to J.D. and gave a calming smile. "Really...is that it?" J.D. whispered a bit surprised. That was a bt too fast for J.D. It was much faster than most of the interviews in the movies. "John! What the hell are you doing to the suspect!" a hoarse deep voice bellowed. A shoulette swept from the door and fell opon J.D. and John, who stood with a half smile, half iritated frown.
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Post by Friday on Nov 6, 2006 23:12:35 GMT -5
((dun dun dun. lol.))
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Post by Repo Man on Nov 29, 2006 13:44:54 GMT -5
"Daniel...you don't have to worry...I just wanted to ask him some questions. "Right...that's what you always say you little punk you...and that Inspector Daniel Cradien to you kid," Cradien remarked.
((Post more. Lunch.))
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Post by Repo Man on Jan 6, 2007 20:47:44 GMT -5
J.D. stared at the man oddly and raised an eyebrow. Cradien was a bit on the large side and his belly burst a bit over his khaki slacks and stretched his black styled belt. He wore a blue button shirt with a black overcoat, the usual look for any inspector or detective. Though, he smelt of cheese and doughnuts and J.D. gave a small hack and cleared his throat. "Hello...Inspector..." Jason remarked calmy, extending a friendly hand and a fake smile crossing his face. Cradien turned to J.D. "Hey boy. So, your the kid who called us in. How do you know Miss..." he glanced to he pad and then glanced back to J.D. "Lilus Marie Irons?" Did he just call me boy? "I'm her older brother, Jason Irons." he answered with a deeper tone and a bit of a bothered glance. "Really?" Cradien retorted with a suspisious tone. "Well then...could we ask you a few questions Johnny?" "Its Jason Cradien." John itruded. "Oh who cares. The boy knows who I'm talking to." Cradien snorted. J.D. cringed and gave a heavy sigh. This is going to be a long day...
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Post by Repo Man on Jan 23, 2007 20:01:08 GMT -5
"Let go of me you bastards!!" Lily scoffed loudly, wriggling in the chair she was tied into. In front of her was a long table. Above her was a small ray of light in the dark room. "Neil let me and the girls go!" she hissed, swaying back and forth violently. She lifted the chair off each leg everytime her body swayed a different way. After a while, it seemed she would probably tip over at one point. "Oh calm down." Neil pouted, strolling from the shadows and into her view. "You called?" he questioned. In his hands was a bowl of some sort of food. Looked like a soup and it smelt delious from where Lily was standing (more like sitting from). "Let me go now..." she snapped loudly again, stomping her feet furiously onto the hard concrete ground. Neil shook his head and gave a heavy groan. "Must you talk so loud...your too noisy." he rubbed his temples. "LET ME GO! NOW!!" she shouted just to annoy him. "Will you shut up! I will let you have my food, if you promise to shut...up!" he snarled, spacing the words shut and up from one another in an irritated tone. He slid the bowl across the table and it stopped quite a little way from her. Also, she was tied up. "I don't wan't your food. Let me go!" "You really can't keep quiet can you?" he grumbled, striding before her and pushing the bowl closer to her. Picking the spoon from the bowl, Neil spooned the food into her mouth and gave a smile. "How is it?" he asked. Lily chewed and swallowed it. "Tastes like shit." she grumbled. Man can Neil cook! Its good! Though, I can't let him know that. "Sure it is," he chuckled. "That's because its made out of your friend Raven!" he stated with a bellow of laughter and a snort, slapping his leg from the unusally hilarity. Lily stared with a fearful looked a practically turned green. Her mouth exploded with food and Neil stepped back quickly, almost getting splashed with her vomit. He was laughing, "My goodness Lily. You are gulible. I would never cook a human being as long as I live!" he laughed. Lily stared up at him and gave a aching stare. "It's kinda hard to tell if your lying...since your a monster anyway. It's something that I would expect from you." she scoffed back.
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Post by Repo Man on Feb 22, 2007 15:59:12 GMT -5
"Oh don't be such a sour sport Lilus!" Neil exhaled, circling around Lily with hard and inspecting eyes. His mouth had a creased smirk as his hands moved briskly along the head of the chair, his cold hands only touching Lily's skin for a moment, but sent a chill up her spine that could last a lifetime. "Why...are you doing this Neil! Why are you doing this! And why did you kill that cop!" she snapped with a demanding voice. "Because he didn't give me everything I wanted. I asked for 8 million dollars for another girl I kidnapped. I think her name was Ami or something..." he babbled to himself, as if the girl was nothing to him and never would be. "Anyway, they only gave us 4 million and so we got into a fight and I accidently shot the girl an-" "What! you killed a young girl!" she gasped, her eyes like saucers. "Neil...ho-how could you do that! Your a -" "I wasn't done telling the story! Now shut up!" he bellowed, smacking Lily hard along the back of her head. "And the cop got in the way and killed one of my guys and so...I killed him," he said with a surprising and enjoying smile. "You sick...how can someone murder someone for such a ridiculious reason!" she questioned visiously. "Because we can! Men have morals yes but when men are sent to war they have no problem slaughtering one another. So, why should it be different now? Murder is commited by the very society that leads us all. I find murder as...as a step to a new and growing level, nothing like you place it as. It's what places you away from a defenseless child and becoming a feared and powerful b-" "Monster." "No...I was going to say being but if monster works for you, that's fine with me." he grumbled to himself childishly.
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