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Post by Snack Addict on Jul 12, 2006 15:32:15 GMT -5
((Very good, but those grammer errors are driving me insane too!))
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Post by Monday on Jul 12, 2006 21:51:15 GMT -5
well i asked you guys to help with the story, not my grammer!!! so lay off a bit (atleast as far as spelling and stuff.)
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Post by Monday on Jul 12, 2006 22:16:07 GMT -5
(they're really short chapters. lol)
Chapter 2 Right after hastily feeding her family’s chickens, Irei left for the brook which she loved to visit all the time. This secluded spot was the perfect place to relax and read a nice novel. Irei would always read. She loved to go to far off places were no one has dared to venture before, yet stayed in the safety and privacy of her cozy reading spot. Lately, she had taken a great liking to romance novels, where the damsel in distress is saved by her true love, and remains in love while evading the evil that haunts them constantly. She would often daydream about these heroic adventures during her days of chores. She had met many boys before but none of which she felt the same passion and loving with that the people do in her books. Soon, she thought, maybe she would happen to come across a wonderful man like the ones she constantly read about. Maybe, after she turned fifteen tomorrow, her dream would finally become a reality, when she could talk to more mature guys.
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