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Post by Tuesday on Sept 21, 2007 20:26:09 GMT -5
((ok so last year or freshmen idk lol it was one of them well anyways i started writing a story about the ninjas and how they began well i stopped writing it after the first two pages cuz it started sounding like crap....lol but during english this year ive had more time to think about it and ive deicided that im gonna start it up again so here it is my story...
oh and just fyi this is gonna be a trilogy and it is called The Promise of a Ninja series....if ya'll think of a better name please tell me cuz im not sure i like that name ;D ok here it is the first in the series: Tears of Violet!!!!))
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Post by Tuesday on Sept 21, 2007 20:34:24 GMT -5
Prologue
A young woman looked out of her bedroom window, with violet colored eyes, watching the sun rise. As the sun rose into the morning sky mist appeared and began to shimmer with many different colors, rays of sunlight shone across the many fields. The young woman sighed in contempt as the wondrous show came to an end. Today was her seventeenth birthday and her parents and brother were setting up for her celebration. "Mira, come down a sec. I wanna show you something,"called her brother, Karner, from outside. "I'll be down in a bit, Karner! I'll be ready soon, I promise,"she called back sweetly. Mira then cast one last glance out the window then walked to her wardrobe abd began to get ready.
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Post by Tuesday on Sept 21, 2007 20:58:41 GMT -5
Karner smiled to himself and went back to setting up tables. He and his sister were practically best friends. They were so close you would rarely ever see one without the other. They told each other everything and had so many things in common. Many even believed them to be twins despite there age difference, they both had the most beautiful violet eyes and both had stunning black hair and to match their wonderful eyes had purple in their hair; Mira had many streaks of purple and Karner had a strip of purple dangling in front of his face. They were two of kind and everyone knew it. So Karner being the sweet older brother had spent weeks trying to figure out what to give his younger sister and had finally figured out what he would give her. 'She sure did grow up fast,' he thought to himself as he put the finishing touches on the table. "Mira hurry up," he yelled as he turned around, and there before him stood his sister. He smiled softly. Mira stood there looking absolutely beautiful. Her hair was down in soft curls and she wore a simple white three-quarters sleeved shirt with a lavender skirt that went to her knees. Mira stood there with a mischievious smile and giggled," What?" " There was no need to yell so much," She said softly," And why are you so excited? It's my birthday not your's." "Oh come now can't a brother be happy that his young brat of a sister is finally becoming a lady." "Hey I'm always a lady." "Oh sure you are... right after you finish playing around in the mud and running around like the hyper thing you are,"He said with a laugh as he took her hand and led her outside. "Well, I unlike some people don't wish to grow up in a hurry. I would much rather play in the sun and wind like i don't have a care in the world. There's plenty of time to grow up and I personally think we should spend as much time as possible having fun instead of worrying about other stuff,"She said. Karner looked down at his sister as they walked around the garden, yet again she had given wise advise and had not even known it. Sometimes his sister would say the sweetest most innocent thing in the world and it would make total sense. It was this more than anything that had made them both so close.
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Post by Repo Man on Sept 21, 2007 21:06:56 GMT -5
(aww...so cute. ^.^ Great start. Keep writing!)
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Post by Friday on Sept 21, 2007 22:43:38 GMT -5
((aww it is cute??
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Post by Tuesday on Sept 22, 2007 13:46:25 GMT -5
"So, what exactly is it that you want to show me my dear brother?"Mira asked with a smirk. "Now were would the fun be if I told you huh?"He replied. "Hmm, I guess your right," and they continued their walk in silence. Karner looked at his sister again and saw that she was deep in thought, not wanting to interrupt her pondering he remained silent. "Karner,"Mira said finally,"nothing will change between us will it? We'll always be there for each other no matter what right?" "Of course, Mira. You're my sister and my best friend. Which is why I've been trying to think of the perfect gift for you. And I found it. Now my dear sister I need to ask you to close your eyes now and no peaking."He told her smiling. Mira looked at him suspeciously,"This isn't going to be like that one time you told me to close my eyes and ended up pushing me down a hill with mud on it and having mother yell at me for getting my new dress messed up,is it?" Karner laughed,"No, though that was pretty funny. No, this is something entirely special with no tricks at all." Mira smiled and replied,"Ok, Karner, I'm trusting you." And with that closed her eyes and saw darkness. She heard her brother moving around and even heard him curse as he tripped, and laughed. "Shut up," He said with a laugh and continued doing whatever it was he was doing. MIra stood there listening to the sound of her brother. She was really and truly lucky to have him. She had seen how most siblings hated each other or ignored each other, and was glad that wasn't the case with her and her brother. "Mira, I need you to trust me on this. I need you to move to where i want you to be so without openeing your eyes listen to me tell you where to go, alright?"He asked. "Ok,"She said softly,"I'll always trust you Karner." He smiled. Mira sometimes had issues trusting people so to hear her say this was really amazing. " I need you to go forward about seven steps, Mira," He said, and she moved the number of steps he told her. "Ok, now go to the left three steps," She complied," Now, I'm going to position you." Mira felt his hands on her shoulders and felt him nudge her in the direction she needed to face. She felt the morning breeze on her face and smiled softly. "Open your eyes,Mira,"Karner whispered in her ear. Mira slowly opened her violet eyes and gasped. Karner had brought her to the a cliff that faced the lake. IT was gorgeous, the water was a perfect clear blue and the small beaches looked amaing in the morning sky. And the sky itself was perfect. Karner took this moment of distraction and placed a necklace around her neck. Mira looked down and gasped again. The necklace was beautiful. It was shaped like a heart but it had wings on it and it had a golden halo. She turned around and looked at her brother. "Your like my little angel, Mira. You have such a kind heart and are so innocent. When I saw this necklace I was instantly reminded of you. Happy birthday,Mira,"He said with a smile,"I hope you like your present." Mira stared at him with shimmering eyes and suddenly pulled him into a tight bear-hug. "I love it, Karner. Thank you so much,"She said quietly.
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Post by Wednesday on Sept 22, 2007 22:58:56 GMT -5
((how cute))
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Post by Tuesday on Oct 1, 2007 21:31:03 GMT -5
"Come on,"Karner said grabbing her hand,"Let's gp back and see how the decorations are going." THey walked back to the house, each enjoying the others company. Karner smiled, he loved having Mira as his sister. "Mira, I'm going to make today perfect for you,"He told her softly. Mira looked up at him and smiled,"There's no such thing as perfect. But I'm sure it'll be close." Karner laughed remembering the argument they had about perfection a couple of days ago. "OF course, Mira," He said smiling. Mira grinned even more and looked up. She gasped in surprise. Dark clouds had suddenly appeared. "Karner,what's going on? It was bright and sunny a second ago. How can stormy clouds appear out of no where?" She asked fearfully. Mira could feel that something wasnt right. Karner was silent, trying to find some sort of explanation for what was happening," I'm not sure what is going on, Mira. Let's hurry back and see if Dad knows." And with that Karner began to run. "Karner wait up," Mira called out, but it was no use. Karner was to far ahead to hear her. Mira sighed and started to run as fast as she could. The wind had picked up speed and was now blowing around fiercely.
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Post by Tuesday on Oct 14, 2007 20:48:42 GMT -5
"Karner!,"she screamed. A flash of lightning shot out and a boom of thunder came. Mira, stopped and looked up again at the sky. It was nearly dark as night. She tore her gaze from the sky and looked straight ahead. Then she heard it. There were screams in the distance. "Mom! Dad! Karner!" she cried out as she began to run again. Rain began to fall heavily.
BOOM!
Mira entered her village and stopped in shock. The entire village was in the center of destruction. Houses, stores, everywhere was on fire. Explosions could be heard in all directions. People were screaming for their family members. "Oh, my God," Mira whispered. "Mira," a voice screamed out. Mira turned trying to find the voice. Then she saw Karner. "MIRA! GO BACK!," he screamed. But she didn't hear him, and began to run towards him. She wanted her brother close to her and to tell her everything would be alright. "KARNER!" "NO! Mira turn around! Go baa..." Suddenly an explosion shot out between the two siblings, and they were thrown away from each other.
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Post by Wednesday on Oct 14, 2007 21:00:46 GMT -5
(Oh no!)
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Post by Tuesday on Oct 15, 2007 21:44:30 GMT -5
Mira coughed and opened her eyes to smoke and flames. She looked around for Karner and couldn't see him anywhere. THen she heard yells in the distance. "Karner,"she called weakly, footsteps began to come closer,"Is that you, Karner?" "What do you think," a voice whispered harshly in her ear. Mira, startled, turned to the voice and gasped. ONe of the Dark Ninjas was standing right above her holding a knife to her stomach. He looked down at her and smirked, "Time to die," he said and plunged the sword deep into her stomach. "No...,"Mira had tried to say. But it was too late. The Dark Ninja laughed at her as he began to walk away towards his next victim.
Happy Birthday to you...
Tears began to pur out of Mira's eyes as she began to panic.
Happy Birthday to you...
"Karner," she whispered in anguish. Blood was slowly seeping into her white blouse.
Happy Birthday dear Mira...
How can this be happening, she thought to herself as her breathing came in pants, why is no one saving us? Mira's sight began to fade as black dots appeared. "Please," she whispered," Don't let this be the end. All those people need help." The black dots were getting to closer to each other. " Please," she whispered once more. The dots connected and Mira knew no more. Flashes of color shot out everywhere. A bright Purple light swirled around Mira's body and slowly entered into where her heart was. A flash of white shot out into the sky, then darkness returned. A dark figure appeared out of no where and walked to Mira's body. "It is time for your destiny to begin," He whispered. Darkness was everywhere.
Happy Birthday to you.
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Post by Tuesday on Oct 15, 2007 21:45:32 GMT -5
((ok ppl the last couple of paragraphs didnt seem all to great to me...so please message and tell me if it was good or not ;D))
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Post by Wednesday on Oct 15, 2007 21:47:31 GMT -5
((That happy birthday thing gives it a great effect sar-sar))
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Post by Tuesday on Nov 19, 2007 13:57:32 GMT -5
End Prologue
Darkness was everywhere.
Where am I, Mira wondered to herself, it's so dark and cold. What is this place? All around her was darkness and as she walked forward she realized something. Why is it that all around me is pitch black, and yet I can see myself perfectly? "Hello,"She called out," Is anybody out there? Hello?" ...Nothing. Tears began streaming down Mira's face. "Is this the end? Am I all alone?" "No," a voice whispered from the darkness. "Who's there?" Mira asked frightfully. A figure began coming towards from the darkness. "Never lose hope, Mira,"the voice said to her. The voice sounded so familiar to her. Then she realized who's voice it was. "Karner?"She gasped. He appeared before her and took her hand in his and looked in her eyes. "I love you, Mira. Have faith. Everything will be ok, I promise. I have to say goodbye now, Mira. I promise someday will see each other again. I will always be there for you, and I will always protect you." He pulled his hands away from her and began to back away slowly. "Karner, no don't leave me! Please don't leave, I don't want to be alone," Mira cried. "You'll never be alone, Mira. I promise," He said, and disappeared into the darkness. "Karner!," She screamed.
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Post by Tuesday on Dec 9, 2007 1:12:07 GMT -5
"Karner," Mira mumbled. "I think she's waking up now. Give me the wet rag, to put on her forehead. We need to get her fever down," A voice said above her. "Here you go," Another voice answered. Mira could feel shifting going around above her. Suddenly a cold cloth was pressed gently onto her face. Mira groaned, the cold was slowly bring her back into awareness. "Mira," the voice above her whispered, " That's it, Mira. Wake up. I need you to open your eyes." Mira moaned as she slowly craked her eyes open. It was extrememly bright and Mira shut her eyes quickly in pain. "Dim the lights quickly," The voice said sharply then turned back to Mira, " It's ok, It's not as bright anymore. You can open your eyes now," the voice said gently. Mira slowly opened her eyes once again. When she finally managed to awaken fully, she was surprised and terrified that she had no clue where she was.
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